In my second draft, I've restructured everything and reedited them again, I've roughly noted down the feed back. For my next draft, at the opening I need to have more footages of environment and outside scene to reveals a feeling of relax to the audiences. and the time of a black scene which is between two shots. are too long, I need to cut it down for a bit.
At the opening I could also use voice over to draw audiences attention, and also to create contrast, with what's coming next. When my interviewee's talking his experience of using instagram, I could use some images of instagram to show examples to audiences, therefore audience would clearly understood what my interviewee is talking about, but also know a bit more about my interviewee.
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